And the whole, he said she said, format really distracts you from the story. 7 comments«12»READERReport 2007-03-16 10:45:00DAMN! Xx video And the whole, he said she said, format really distracts you from the story. JohnREADERReport 2006-12-31 12:19:03it was prity gudREADERReport 2006-09-07 23:58:46Hey, just some words of advice. And the whole, he said she said, format really distracts you from the story. Try and make it flow a little better and take things slower, teasing and buildup make a story alot better. JohnREADERReport 2006-12-31 12:19:03it was prity gudREADERReport 2006-09-07 23:58:46Hey, just some words of advice. 7 comments«12»READERReport 2007-03-16 10:45:00DAMN! The story should have more detail than that and less random talking. The story should have more detail than that and less random talking.
