You’re stories are “NOW” 9.5/10 and as I’m about 1/2 way through them now I think they are getting better than they were before, as time progresses.Anonymous readerReport 2015-10-20 13:23:23Yeah, must agree about the double-spacing, spelling errors, poor grammar, but I DO LIKE YOUR STORIES. Sometimes a bit predictable, sometimes too intimately detailed, sometimes just boring. XXX I write as well & it would be im-perfect me NOT to be told if I was doing something incorrectly. Sometimes a bit predictable, sometimes too intimately detailed, sometimes just boring. I suppose your level of education causes some problems, but you do try to make up for it with your imagination; it’s just a pity that lack of proof-reading makes the errors stand out like dog’s balls.
