I enjoyed it. XXX 15 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2014-06-13 14:18:53I louved thees story, and I am reeley lougged een. That’s just disgusting. The constant repeating of the same paragraphs randomly, and the atrocious use of question marks for apostrophes was very distracting. SEE?Anonymous readerReport 2014-02-17 17:34:39The story itself has potential. I don’t like insest. I enjoyed it. I stopped right there and couldn’t keep reading. SEE?Anonymous readerReport 2014-02-17 17:34:39The story itself has potential. But you need to clean it up and resubmit it. But you need to clean it up and resubmit it. But you need to clean it up and resubmit it. It’s very distracting when you’re interested in a part, then suddenly it repeats several paragraphs.«123»
