It feels as though you’re giving us just a preview, not the actual story itself. XXX we are indeed emotional creatures most of the time :d a_aanonymous readerReport 2013-08-20 12:59:16Great story. But u can make the stories longer. If you need an example, look for an author named Capitus. Check his no of reads and also the comments on hos on his last story you will understand what I mean.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-20 00:33:50loved everything but that it was alittle short also im sad that the next one isnt outAngelOFLifeReport 2013-08-19 10:32:24Yeah I do apologize for the time I took to write it. i would -shrug- guess this is the é”力 of 木æ‘大神.香里奈 argument at the supermarket was quite touching is it true / false that people find it hard to trust you if you are poor?




















