It would have been so much hotter if you had limited the story to you and just your sister! Much obliged.anonymous readerReport 2013-07-22 20:28:20rushed no character development very little plot and AS USUAL NO END. XXX Video Great blog.Really thank you! You could develop that story and get everyone excited rather than pretty bored.anonymous readerReport 2013-12-13 03:06:55Positive but not very! It would have been so much hotter if you had limited the story to you and just your sister! either go back and properly finish all your stories or delete them. 31 comments«12345»jerryr6Report 2015-08-11 23:22:34Very hot story; and MUCH easier to read without all of the “leader dots”, (. . . . . …) that you use in most of your stories.anonymous readerReport 2013-12-13 03:07:04Positive but not very! either go back and properly finish all your stories or delete them.
