There were some spelling errors but nothing that really took away from the story.Only thing is try and format it better so that it’s easier to read. XXX Video I do agree though that it would be interesting if Axel somehow ends up being a werewolf.anonymous readerReport 2012-04-02 21:31:45I have to agree with the rest of the comments here. Write more if you would pleaseAnonymous readerReport 2014-09-25 04:33:50good storyanonymous readerReport 2012-04-03 14:19:05Can’t wait for the next chapter. ~ Ashanonymous readerReport 2012-03-30 15:53:53really great story please continue but can axel turn into a human because he is a werewolf too? Other than that, a job well done, and I’m looking forward to more chapters. Other than that, a job well done, and I’m looking forward to more chapters.




















