6 comments«12»READERReport 2005-10-15 17:28:10Hey, hope you write more, you still have five days to cover. X Video … I suggest you return to the basics of storytelling. Where does she buy her tee-shirts, the childrens section? Where does she buy her tee-shirts, the childrens section? keep them cummmmming.READERReport 2005-09-27 12:38:00Archaic sums it up fairly well. 6 comments«12»READERReport 2005-10-15 17:28:10Hey, hope you write more, you still have five days to cover. … Best of luck!READERReport 2005-09-26 11:18:28Well, now we have the titmans perspective. It ruined the story totally. 6 comments«12»READERReport 2005-10-15 17:28:10Hey, hope you write more, you still have five days to cover. … That said, it’s not a bad story–you could rewrite it by filling it out. keep them cummmmming.READERReport 2005-09-27 12:38:00Archaic sums it up fairly well. keep them cummmmming.READERReport 2005-09-27 12:38:00Archaic sums it up fairly well.
