Thanks.”«1» And slow down with your typing you keep repeating words, other than that I loved it mananonymous readerReport 2011-07-04 04:25:26slow down and take a sec to reread your stuff it will help u catch simple mistakes like this
“Second story, I’m trying to improve my writing so ant tips or advice will be very helpful. But great story make a second partanonymous readerReport 2011-07-04 12:07:04I like your story. X Video Thanks.”«1» And slow down with your typing you keep repeating words, other than that I loved it mananonymous readerReport 2011-07-04 04:25:26slow down and take a sec to reread your stuff it will help u catch simple mistakes like this
“Second story, I’m trying to improve my writing so ant tips or advice will be very helpful.
