Sooo many fragments. XXX The idea was awesome, but the terrible grammar and structure killed the turnon. Sooo many fragments. I like the idea though.«123» Awesome.anonymous readerReport 2012-02-11 20:53:36hTY5Bz Develop the topic further! It is interesting to know more details..!!anonymous readerReport 2011-07-22 22:08:26Very hard to follow.anonymous readerReport 2010-08-31 16:35:35Yes, the lack of transition… I like the idea though.«123» what?” is not a sexy thought.READERReport 2007-08-13 05:35:18Take it slower with the sex scenes to make it more erotic. what?” is not a sexy thought.READERReport 2007-08-13 05:35:18Take it slower with the sex scenes to make it more erotic. It is interesting to know more details..!!anonymous readerReport 2011-07-22 22:08:26Very hard to follow.anonymous readerReport 2010-08-31 16:35:35Yes, the lack of transition… Sooo many fragments. Awesome.anonymous readerReport 2012-02-11 20:53:36hTY5Bz Develop the topic further!
