Second, use the proper spelling for the words you mean. XXX Also along those lines. . …’Through’ means passing between two places, as in, she went through the door. That’s ‘Threw’. Which is it? It can also be used to indicate completion, as in, I’m through now. Is the sister Traci or Terry? . …’Through’ means passing between two places, as in, she went through the door. ‘You’re’ is the contraction of you are, as in, you’re screwing up the story by not using the correct spelling for the word you mean. Which is it? Is the sister Traci or Terry? Also along those lines. 7 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-12-04 23:14:22lame negative ratingAnonymous readerReport 2014-07-05 15:20:24First of all, keep the characters’ names straight.




















