It’s a completey understandable mistake, but is kind if weird when reading it.Anonymous readerReport 2011-03-03 09:06:58This could have been so much better. XXX Video 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-01-09 04:14:55This should have been a great story here but it was put in a simple point of view with no real meat to the story. Mom and I are lovers. You’re a great writer. It lacks great description or a real plot. But if you really want critiism here use this as a sketch and rewrite it with more background and feeling and yes i mean sex. But if you really want critiism here use this as a sketch and rewrite it with more background and feeling and yes i mean sex. Not bad, though.«1» We live in a small town and mind our own business and our love
