Let’s Start with the intro, so Ken is two years younger than Mendy who is 20, therefore Ken is 18 but still lives at home and Mendy helps him at times? It’s also odd how you forget apostrophes for words like her’s. XXX Video porn 4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-02-28 18:37:478XlROj I loved your article.Much thanks again. J.A.G«1» 4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-02-28 18:37:478XlROj I loved your article.Much thanks again. From what I read I would give it a 7.6 out of 10. If it’s only a fantasy story, make yourself taller, change the daughter’s name to Mindy or Wendy, explain what is wrong with your son (ie Bi-polar or ??)
Not a BAD story – just needs some improvement.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-11 02:18:40For the most part it’s a decent story from what I read but could be better.
