You wrote a very good story. XXX Remember this, you may have to use it again if you continue to attempt to write..«12345» They should ALWAYS be used to indicate what the person is saying or has said. Remember this, you may have to use it again if you continue to attempt to write..«12345» 266 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2016-09-27 04:17:25Screw the spelling. Congratulations. When you are quoting something that someone said, you set that text off with quotation marks. You wrote a very good story. Don’t be discouraged by them stupid people who think that they are English professor’s.Anonymous readerReport 2014-09-21 23:48:03This would be amazing but you used way too many ellipsis and not nearly enough quotation marksAnonymous readerReport 2014-08-04 10:04:23Stop the madness the grammar the misspellings its too much would be a much better story with a




















