But I think this story does need to go somewhere more. XXX Video You probably should write a Pt2 to ” Laurie” first though as it was your best effort and could easy have some followups. 9 comments«12»READERReport 2008-02-17 20:44:28A few errors, and you really should have continued it, and you should write non-erotic in the tag section next time with a story like this.READERReport 2006-05-10 13:25:25Another excellent story by this author. 9 comments«12»READERReport 2008-02-17 20:44:28A few errors, and you really should have continued it, and you should write non-erotic in the tag section next time with a story like this.READERReport 2006-05-10 13:25:25Another excellent story by this author. I’ve read a few of your other stories and I think you’ve got talent. Invisible indeed!«12» You probably should write a Pt2 to ” Laurie” first though as it was your
