You are prone to flowery verse that reminds me of Early O’Henry at his worst. Do NOT give up your day job!!«1» Nice critiques are insincere as a rule. XXX 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-04-08 22:27:01the negro talk was stupid, the few that i know SPEAK english BETTER than you write4bearReport 2008-10-22 17:34:13Pretentiious Difficult to follow. You are prone to flowery verse that reminds me of Early O’Henry at his worst. In writing the exclamation mark denotes yelling, screaming and the intense emotions accompanying them. Nice critiques are insincere as a rule. Instead I she give you my honest thoughts. One last thought. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-04-08 22:27:01the negro talk was stupid, the few that i know SPEAK english BETTER than you write4bearReport 2008-10-22 17:34:13Pretentiious Difficult to follow. You will impress more people with your story telling abilities if
