It is very jerky and has no flow. XXX For those that said it was good, need to take another look. there was no girl/female action.just a very crappily told story about a guy masturbating outside a girls window. For those that said it was good, need to take another look. there was no girl/female action.just a very crappily told story about a guy masturbating outside a girls window. For those that said it was good, need to take another look. then a jumbled crappy collage from the $2 porn section at the truck stop. 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-06 00:49:26That Was A Good Story And I Hope You Write Another One!Anonymous readerReport 2014-03-02 07:18:30I agree with fix’em story was alright but needs fixed and you could write a sequel but that’s just a few suggestions, keep
