You forgot “What happened to her hymen?”
Shit story. XXX The story also needs more visuals, that is why people get bored with the story. If they had been kissing before this weekend and in the park, than why do they act surprised at the chemistry? I give the story a 7 more if he would have described better.READERReport 2006-01-01 21:30:28great story. You put a lot of effort into a story, make it count. No sexual description. You put a lot of effort into a story, make it count. The story also needs more visuals, that is why people get bored with the story. 10 comments«12»READERReport 2006-10-12 22:57:10Now what is it about a good slow fuck between consenting teens that just sounds like it is O.K.
