Retired MDREADERReport 2006-08-06 23:25:37Hi everyone, thanks for the feedback on my story, Shattered means tired baller, im from northern ireland so thats the slang for tired here. XXX but yeah.. if not oh well. and i’m guessing shattered means drunk? just a story:) :p Though it’s nice when it’s realistic.. but I think it gets less realistic to the end.. A longer story has been wrote tonight so should be on display within a few daysREADERReport 2006-08-03 21:39:59Nice since I am in IRAQ even better then goodREADERReport 2006-07-31 02:55:46good story. Tim what part wasnt realistic, similar experience happened me. keep writing.READERReport 2006-07-31 02:40:51The story is alright:) Starts pretty realistic .. Bear hun im glad that you liked my story, another one was sent in tonight.
