I’m not talking about your story just your English.«12» keep at it its not easy to please this lot!!!READERReport 2007-04-07 13:53:48I can overlook the bad English and horrible spelling but you shouldn’t be able to write a story on the back of a post card. … XXX Video porn I’m not talking about your story just your English.«12» way way way too fucking shortREADERReport 2007-04-07 10:20:46Yeah, punctuation and spelling. Fix ’em.READERReport 2007-04-06 23:39:57DUDE MORE PRACTICE I GIVE IT A 3/10 MAKE EM LONGER MORE DETAILEZREADERReport 2007-04-06 14:54:25You need an English class real bad. I’m not talking about your story just your English.«12» 8 comments«12»READERReport 2007-04-07 21:18:59crap but i fink u could probs improve soon. Maybe you will improve in a few years. Maybe you will improve in a few years. way way way too fucking shortREADERReport 2007-04-07 10:20:46Yeah, punctuation and spelling.











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