keep writing, but sex story or not grammar is a big thing in any story.Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-31 22:43:53hmm.. ur story sucksREADERReport 2007-10-07 23:00:04dude u fucking suckREADERReport 2007-02-03 21:59:24story was fine, it would help iff you had a proof reader to fix the fuck ups. Xx video Igave you a 5/10«12» ur story sucksREADERReport 2007-10-07 23:00:04dude u fucking suckREADERReport 2007-02-03 21:59:24story was fine, it would help iff you had a proof reader to fix the fuck ups. ur story sucksREADERReport 2007-10-07 23:00:04dude u fucking suckREADERReport 2007-02-03 21:59:24story was fine, it would help iff you had a proof reader to fix the fuck ups. 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2010-05-18 09:29:11ummmm… how do i put this nicely…
