The story has potential, but the spelling, grammar, and technical details were horrendous and ought to be checked before publishing.anonymous readerReport 2011-05-12 10:28:23IJWTS wow! drag it out more. X Video 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-05-22 02:21:36Wow, some of the more painful writing I’ve muddled through. {intentional words} I joust love when the word is spelled write, butt utterly the rung won to use their.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-14 23:07:37kinda harsh Ghostrider939… Why can’t I think of tinhgs like that?anonymous readerReport 2011-04-20 00:41:18He rammed ur ass then immediately came. … to the author i would advise reading over what you write and making sure it sounds right and try to add more to the sex…
