5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-05-22 22:09:37I loved it! Xx video The flow could use work and it could have been lnger though.anonymous readerReport 2012-02-02 01:13:17I liked it, though I’d think better of it if it were longer. Also, I hate to be a grammar nazi, but the continuous flow, instead of proper paragraphs with the dialogue make it difficult to read. So great! Also, I hate to be a grammar nazi, but the continuous flow, instead of proper paragraphs with the dialogue make it difficult to read. The flow could use work and it could have been lnger though.anonymous readerReport 2012-02-02 01:13:17I liked it, though I’d think better of it if it were longer. The ending seems rather abrupt.




















