2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-21 23:06:59great story. Write you next chapter. XXX Try double spacing and separating the dialogue. Try double spacing and separating the dialogue. 2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-21 23:06:59great story. 2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-21 23:06:59great story. Try double spacing and separating the dialogue. loved it.hotjohn4321Report 2013-08-05 16:59:25Good start at writing. Try double spacing and separating the dialogue. Write you next chapter. Waiting for chapter 2.«1» loved it.hotjohn4321Report 2013-08-05 16:59:25Good start at writing. Waiting for chapter 2.«1» Waiting for chapter 2.«1» Waiting for chapter 2.«1» Also, even though not perfect for spelling, use Word or similar program to write then copy and paste here. Write you next chapter. Waiting for chapter 2.«1» Also, even though not perfect for spelling, use Word or similar program to write then copy and paste here. Waiting for chapter 2.«1» Try double spacing and
