That’s really all I have to say about it. Xx video Not only that, but the dialogue felt pretty forced at times as well. That’s really all I have to say about it. But if you keep going about your writing as you currently are, then you’ll never reach that potential. You do have a good story here and I think that you can definitely attract a good fanbase with this. Even though your plot is pretty good, your horrendous grammar and spelling just make the story unbearably difficult to read. That’s really all I have to say about it. I’m really not exaggerating when I say that it’s that bad. But if you keep going about your writing as you currently are, then you’ll never reach that potential.
Actors:
Maggie Green
