8 comments«12»AnnistaysiaReport 2014-12-17 06:53:55I reread my previous comment and decided to post another to elaborate on something’s a little further. When I said it seems to me your Characters are Gay, I’m going off their Character interaction only. XXX Video porn Also please go into a bit more detail about his passed, what made his family resent him so bad, and treat him the way they did. Again, I’m not trying to be a Bitch in any way, I’m just critiquing your work to try to make you a better writer.AnnistaysiaReport 2014-12-17 06:37:22So, this is the third in the series. Again, description is a little better, grammar is still absolutely terrible, and I have no idea what the character, who I’m guessing is Ellen, looks like. What makes these other male characters what to get their rocks off
