i am currently working on a couple of other things which are near completion, but i promise there will be a second part. XXX Video Try to think about paragraphs in terms of thematic unity: a paragraph is a sentence or a group of sentences that supports one central, unified idea. 6 comments«12»slow2burnReport 2021-05-11 02:53:12What is a paragraph? Try composing your material better by using pargraphs it does make the story look better on paper and so more appealing to read!!!«12» many thanks
chip84freshmanReport 2009-02-10 02:23:18A bit short but still quite good will we be seeing anymore of the forced slavery of Rachael. Paragraphs add one idea at a time to your broader argument.Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-05 06:07:55Very good – however watch your punctuation and grammer and please break the text down to paragraphs as it is really hard to
