if i added false things to make it longer it probably would have runied it. if i added false things to make it longer it probably would have runied it. XXX if you want long stories read fiction ones as they can go in any direction idiotAnonymous readerReport 2008-10-27 01:28:20This isn’t a story…its a postcard!Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-08 08:55:35dude its too short«12» if you want long stories read fiction ones as they can go in any direction idiotAnonymous readerReport 2008-10-27 01:28:20This isn’t a story…its a postcard!Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-08 08:55:35dude its too short«12» 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-01-17 06:16:59Nice story, reminds me of my first encounter with a mature woman when I was 16anonymous readerReport 2011-01-09 03:40:27Excellent little teaser story. if you want long stories read fiction ones as they can go in any direction idiotAnonymous readerReport 2008-10-27 01:28:20This isn’t a story…its a postcard!Anonymous
