just work on your story line, and try to describe actual detail, not the events, just the detail.READERReport 2007-10-22 09:20:01That was shit.READERReport 2007-10-21 17:07:29I just re read it and i agree it is fucking shit, i dont know what the fuck i was thinking when i wrote this. XXX Video well at least it wasn’t very long, because that was a hot idea, but a shitty presentation. well at least it wasn’t very long, because that was a hot idea, but a shitty presentation. well at least it wasn’t very long, because that was a hot idea, but a shitty presentation. just work on your story line, and try to describe actual detail, not the events, just the detail.READERReport 2007-10-22 09:20:01That was shit.READERReport 2007-10-21 17:07:29I just re read it and i agree it is fucking shit, i dont know
