more!!READERReport 2007-04-21 13:50:14too long? XXX 8 comments«12»READERReport 2008-03-25 19:26:26fantastic, ingore the comments about the british lingo, that guy’s obviously a complete joker. if he doesn’t like it, go read an american written story. this was a pretty good story, good detail, short stories are seldom very interesting, mostly missing important detail, or not expanding enough on subjects that could make it better. maybe add a sensual and erotic yet very kinky mff threesome and you’ve got a great series to build upon.READERReport 2007-04-16 16:44:32great story. this was a pretty good story, good detail, short stories are seldom very interesting, mostly missing important detail, or not expanding enough on subjects that could make it better. but where does amie fit into it all? more of the same please!READERReport 2007-04-24 02:06:29great story. but where does amie fit into it all?
