Either make it graphic or alluditory, but not a little bit of both.READERReport 2004-06-08 23:54:04Spelling errors in poetry is suicidal. XXX Use more euphonisms or none at all. Post corrections.«1» Post corrections.«1» Either make it graphic or alluditory, but not a little bit of both.READERReport 2004-06-08 23:54:04Spelling errors in poetry is suicidal. It seems more a first draft than a piece of poetry…READERReport 2004-06-13 23:24:09Your attempt is admirable, but i agree with Jack. post corrections. Either make it graphic or alluditory, but not a little bit of both.READERReport 2004-06-08 23:54:04Spelling errors in poetry is suicidal. Post corrections.«1» post corrections. Post corrections.«1» 4 comments«1»READERReport 2005-01-10 22:09:32wtf. … Use more euphonisms or none at all.



















