THIS NEVER SHOULD HAVE BEEN POSTED IT IS NOTHING MORE THAN A FIRST DRAFT. DELETE AND GET A GOOD WRITER TO REWRITE IT FOR YOU THEN IT MIGHT BE WORTH READING.anonymous readerReport 2012-07-04 23:31:40char, char, char, char, char, etc. XXX wtfanonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 05:14:11good story. keep writing this was really good. wtfanonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 05:14:11good story. and i gave it tenanonymous readerReport 2012-01-15 00:51:23Need* fixing comment belowanonymous readerReport 2012-01-15 00:50:23I have read some absolutely brilliant stories and I have read some complete pieces of shit *cough* all of fbaily’s stories *cough* but this is the first story I ever felt the new to rate and it got a big ol thumbs down«12» ignore them most good books have spelling errors. and i gave it tenanonymous readerReport 2012-01-15 00:51:23Need* fixing comment belowanonymous readerReport 2012-01-15 00:50:23I have read some absolutely brilliant stories and
