I apologize for shooting my keyboard off without knowing what I was typing about. 23 comments«12345»Wildfire1180Report 2020-06-13 04:58:37That was a great story!!Anonymous readerReport 2014-07-03 12:57:21Loved it can’t wait for part twoAnonymous readerReport 2009-11-30 07:19:55I would have preferred a more positive response to the gift he was given, mind you it was probably more realistic this way. XXX Frankly, I didn’t read your story all that closely, chiefly due to the god-awful spacing – it’s hard to read a wall-o-text. There is little that alienates readers more than hubris. I apologize for shooting my keyboard off without knowing what I was typing about. I’d like to be perfectly honest and say that, it upset me that the comment left by the other reader was mostly complaining about little technical things, and that they were actually wrong about most




















