Urfantasyman92 it was a good start a little short but I liked don’t let the spelling police keep u from making a part 2.anonymous readerReport 2011-12-30 05:17:10I have to agree with one of the comments. XXX It lacked description and flow and of course your use of the English language was attrocious. . Learn to read and write English before you attempt another story. . 12 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2012-09-21 02:22:08Thrilling , teasing , sensual and sexually exciting gradually told buildup which keeps me rivoted , aroused and eagerly wanting more . Urfantasyman92 it was a good start a little short but I liked don’t let the spelling police keep u from making a part 2.anonymous readerReport 2011-12-30 05:17:10I have to agree with one of the comments. . Learn to read and write English before you attempt another
