delete both stories and rewrite them properly. XXX these two chapters are nothing more than a story OUTLINE it is not a POSTABLE STORY. these two chapters are nothing more than a story OUTLINE it is not a POSTABLE STORY. USE YOUR HEAD FOR MORE THAN A SEAT CUSHION AND POST IN GERMAN OR USE AN ENGLISH EDITOR. 18 comments«1234»Anonymous readerReport 2016-03-21 14:09:50It was a good start but you really need to finish the story before you submit it.Anonymous readerReport 2013-12-26 18:50:27another crappy chapter that FAILS to give proper background or character development. WHERES ALL THE BACKGROUND?? USE YOUR HEAD FOR MORE THAN A SEAT CUSHION AND POST IN GERMAN OR USE AN ENGLISH EDITOR.
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