36 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2016-12-10 09:21:33I’m NOT generally knocking this… Xx video as virtually all sentence structures & paragraphs are fine. Come-on. … as virtually all sentence structures & paragraphs are fine. However. … that’s BASIC !!!Anonymous readerReport 2014-07-15 20:45:22I am an SFO Officer from SFOH and i was asigned to read your stories this one was awesome. 36 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2016-12-10 09:21:33I’m NOT generally knocking this… 36 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2016-12-10 09:21:33I’m NOT generally knocking this… virtually EVERY sentence & paragraph is started with a LOWER-case letter??? virtually EVERY sentence & paragraph is started with a LOWER-case letter??? I had to releave myself both times.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-05 17:37:22FUCKING GREAT STORY (part1, and part2) looking forward to part 3, plllzz include more pissing, and drinking of the pisss!!!anonymous readerReport 2011-08-05 17:36:50FUCKING GREAT STORY (part1, and part2) looking forward to part 3, plllzz include more pissing,
