Overall, if the story had ended before the email from her dad I would have been completely satisfied. then infer that somehow a seventeen year old would think you were some kind of adonis? Xx video she looks for him, finds him, and they reignite their romance«1» Still, great story overall. if you had no other ideas for the story then cut it don’t waste our fucking time!anonymous readerReport 2011-12-10 14:45:15I agree with the previous comment. It just didn’t make sense that an 18 year old (or nearly so if she’s graduating) could not contact him if she really cared about him. 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-05-04 12:25:20Loved the story, hated the ending. if you had no other ideas for the story then cut it don’t waste our fucking time!anonymous readerReport 2011-12-10 14:45:15I agree with the previous comment.
