keep up the good work. XXX Video I do like what you write very much. keep up the good work. and correct, it’s meant to ‘indent and pause’ and was used perfectly in this story. It is both unnecessary and severely detracts from the good effort you put into your otherwise excellent writing.anonymous readerReport 2011-09-26 16:50:34bunch of fucking writing police or what? I just believe an ellipsis at the beginning of every paragraph detracts from your overall presentation.droopysdadReport 2011-09-26 20:58:32I absolutely agree with Anonymous Reader. 9 comments«12»blueheattReport 2011-10-07 19:10:37Thank you for your comments. I do like what you write very much. anyone who can’t follow reading one of your stories needs to take some classes on reading comprehensionblueheattReport 2011-09-26 06:59:27OK, the DOT DOT DOT is used ‘indent’ and ‘pause’.«12» It is both unnecessary and severely detracts from the good
