;)«12» My only grievance is that it ends too quickly. Anon reader did said some good key points about it. Xx video Anon reader did said some good key points about it. The foreplay could give an opportunity to not only describe these feelings, but also lengthen the story. I like your style. Story telling is a lot like love making. Being more graphic would detract from the romance. I would love for you to continue writing some more wonderful stories.anonymous readerReport 2012-11-11 15:16:14You are a very talented writer. This isn’t a graphic story, it’s a romantic story. Good love making also involves a lot more foreplay than you described. Anon reader did said some good key points about it. Story telling is a lot like love making.
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