overall, great storyanonymous readerReport 2013-08-14 16:29:32good start. XXX I suggest proof reading the story to make sure that you catch all the spelling mistakes, or get a text to voice program and have it speak you story. slow down and give our excitement time to build up. overall, great storyanonymous readerReport 2013-08-14 16:29:32good start. slow down and give our excitement time to build up. I suggest proof reading the story to make sure that you catch all the spelling mistakes, or get a text to voice program and have it speak you story. I suggest proof reading the story to make sure that you catch all the spelling mistakes, or get a text to voice program and have it speak you story.
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