She has a great story of her own here, so she knows what she is talking about. I agree with her 100%. Xx video HopefullAuthorHopefullAuthorReport 2012-10-30 23:58:13Hello Stranger92
I just finished reading your story, and I want to say that I loved it. I don’t agree with other comments, your language is fine.«1234» You did a wonderful job of handling the dialogue, which is something that a lot of writers have problems with. Your story was very well thought out. It is a fantastic story. I love a good romantic story that has a happy ending and yours sure did. I had more problems reading some of the comments that some people have made here about your story, then I did reading your story.gymgirlReport 2012-10-29 17:54:55Haha great story!
