Wish i knew of a club like thatREADERReport 2007-12-09 11:28:48Try Slowing down and think about what you are tring to tell.READERReport 2007-01-20 22:51:18I normally write my comments at the end of Chapter Stories. Other than that i thought the premise was terrific. XXX I feel this, regardless of wome written comments, well versed and very, very interested. It’s like you knew what you wanted to create for us but got bored in the telling. I do think you should slow down a little bit as i felt the middle chapters were rushed. but then im not into incest so that was a turn off for me. It’s like you knew what you wanted to create for us but got bored in the telling.
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BlackXChrist / Savanna Star
