Comes across as very “young teenage” ie: I rolled up, she showed her nipple, naturally we fucked. What (or who’s) next? XXX I was so excited I blasted a huge load, most of it going all over her face.Anonymous readerReport 2015-07-15 15:45:54A great storyline but needs more build up. Keep writingAnonymous readerReport 2015-04-01 01:35:46Terrible ending… So the reader can identify or empathise with one or more characters. All that build up for nothing!Anonymous readerReport 2014-12-02 01:42:49And then they said that mom and son don’t fuck«12345» She smiled, opened her mouth and stuck her tongue out for me to cum on. She suddenly woke up and I freaked. She suddenly woke up and I freaked. It’s incest, so perhaps add a little doubt in the mind of the adult (we know the kid’ll fuck anything with a hole).
